I appreciate your writing. I can feel the emotions of this poem. This one also flows very well. Only thing I would say is you can do better with your punctuation marks. Otherwise it's a good poem.

I really liked reading your poem. You know for me sometimes that's all i really do feel good for....just lying in bed and sobbing. It's something i can always count on to happen, it's the one thing that doesn't fail me.
good job and i send you a great big hug =]

melanie

Awww 55