Hey there. I like what you're writing about, it'a all very honest and heartfelt. I couldn't help feeling however that it was written down in a very basic way, like you didn't really think about what you are trying to say...kind of cliche you know?...please don't be offended. If you want to discuss this mail me...

hey
thankz i take no offense i want to know what people think of my writing i am happy that you are honest love much
holly

Aww Hunny, that was awesome. I'm sorry you can't see your bf. I hope everything will be OK soon. Love&Kisses

LOVN IT HOLLY

thank yall fro the comments they mean a lot love much
holly

I love this poem. and yeah i kinda realized i wont be able to get over him soon and i try to go out with other guys but they all remind me of him. i just want what we had back. its not exactly him i miss, its the memories. but great poem && thanx for the comment.