I like what you are saing here, great message and you are so right!
The only mistake I found:

"bur" should be "but".

Otherwise, this was very inspiring and touching. Keep writing, always and forever...

Sweet!

that was inspring poem!
this poem is awesome
speically when you are havin a bad day
i will deinfinally add this poem to my fav man
keep the good work comin!

5/5

Love it!!!

That's so true..
we should thank God for everythin even if we have bad times... we should not forget the other blessings..
Good job,plz keep it up..

Loved this poem alot
it has a good message behind it

good job

O0o0o...i liked this one!! ;-) good job