Comments : Music Box

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lyssi,

    I suppose this 'music box' could almost be taken metaphorically. Is this, in fact, a lady whose career has run its course and whose glory days are behind her? She cannot move on from a world of showbiz, glitz and glamour, perhaps.
    Or is it literally a battered old music box? Either way, the tale is a sad one and could apply either way.

    Very well done,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is sad but very honest and relatable...

    Suggestion: Second line I think would flow Bette without the word 'come'

    Em