Life

Since you hav'nd put anything up new <kinda like keeping your fans waiting> I'M forced
to critiuie your old poems again. you say
life's a gift and I agree but does always have to be a pair of tube socks for some.
I mean some people like myself get up every day and work hard and do whatever Im suppose to do as a husband and father
and yet nothing seems to ever make me happy. I mean don't get me wrong jess I
DO APPPeciate my family but sometimes
I just wish I could find what ever it is that
would make me want to get up the next day
I mean really want to get up. life is just
the same old s**t day after day. like Im
in sleepwalk mode you know.

This is a great poem. I wirte more dreppressing and dark poems, but i can relate to this somehow. Keep up the good work though i like your poems.

It's amazing to learn that at your young age you already wrote very nice poems. Keep it up my dear.

I M not sure where I heard this befor but someone said that the journey to life starts
with the first step. but the journey or path as you put it depends unpond you and the choice you make. Jess you see all the wrong choices around you and you know you don't
want that mess up life so look for the right
path and take it. Don't be a sheep be a leaner make a good path and others
will follow. Believe it or not I see great
things for you. Always did. I don't pretend
to know you. In a SEETHER song called
rise above it theres a line that applieds to
you < Im gonna mend myself befor it gets me and rise above it> thats you and your
path. <3 cy

WOWWWWWW this one is a thinker. actually
made me think about a few chioces. I think
life is what you make of it. but you can't control what other people do or feel. so
they can make or break your day. you
say life's a gift but does it always have to be a pair of tube socks?