Heavenly Habitat

by Michael D Nalley   Aug 21, 2008


Is heaven the place we place our gods
Or are we placed what are the odds
Is wondering a habit of the mind
Can we, or do we leave habits behind

Some say evolution determines our shape
Do habits and habitats alter the ape?
Some say no I do not believe
It all began with Adam and Eve

No is such a negative word
Let your mind go free as a bird
Do not be lead by only the blind
Open you eyes, see what you can find

What if the world was a spiritual habitat?
Living in peace, can you imagine that?
Wearing our habits like hearts on our sleeves
Learning our lessons like Adams and Eves

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  • 15 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Nicely written i love poems that make you think great job on this one

  • 15 years ago

    by SG Khan

    Oh, WOW!! Nicely worded and written. When you have the ability to make your readers sit back and ponder on words they passively brushed off, pat yourself on the shoulder hun!! You did a great job putting this piece together! God Bless!!
    *5/5*

  • 15 years ago

    by Mishka

    Very creative and good message... :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    Wow. I absolutely loved the third stanza. I like all of your poems, of course. This one is probably my favorite of yours, though. I loved the question you ask.

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Excellent poem truly aamzing ryme, flawless in my eyes.

    beautiful written, good questioning also.

    keep up the good work,

    5/5

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