Comments : Much Too Late

  • 9 years ago

    by cher

    Love this poem. So much feelin put into it. Keep up the great writing. :-D

  • 9 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Wow this was really good I must admit, I loved the flow and the rhymes it made it so easy to read yet the emotions were so strong. People always ruin love and a chance at happiness for something that has no future at all, I never understood that. Great job though 5/5 for sure GG23 P.S. I would change a few words around slightly to make the poem even better, for example:

    "Before you did the things above
    Should've known your life without my love
    Now you'll spend your life trying to find
    Everything that you've left behind"

    I would make it

    Before you did these things above
    Should've thought of life without my love
    Now you'll spend your time trying to find
    Everything that you left behind

    Just a suggestion but it's still an amazing poem either way, excellent job GG23

  • 9 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Wow i thought this was perfect! so excellent for a contest! this was awesome! i totally loved it! instead of givin you a 5, ill give ya a 10! lol

  • 9 years ago

    by Kayl

    I absolutely love this poem

  • Wow this is amazing

  • 9 years ago

    by Mishka

    So so beautiful.... just simply amazing... great job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Wow i really liked this poem!
    its so powerful
    and the rhyming is beautiful

    it sounds like a very tough situation to go through, and i hope that if you went through that everything has worked out alright for you

    once again excellent poem i really enjoyed reading it
    5/5

    xxx

  • 9 years ago

    by LostLove329

    Omg that is so funny im like in that same position.. Damn mama that's real cute! I LOVE IT!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    That was a very fun poem to read! I really enjoyed that last part of it! Great poem!

  • 9 years ago

    by TeenageLoveAffair

    Hey! I really liked it! It's so amazing how complete strangers can relate to your personal writing! Keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by Spoiled Princess

    FANTASTIC!!! I LOVE IT!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    Brilliant

  • 9 years ago

    by Joanna Misponas

    This poem is amazingly well written its so deadly but to tell the truth i kinda wrote a peom just like this...almost like this though...

  • 9 years ago

    by Moe F

    Wow grl that is just one great poem so deep so tough on the meant person

  • 9 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    That was great wow i can relate to this poem,very great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by ChaChi

    I love this poem of yours....it's awesome!!!
    I've never actually met ot know someone that really "fall" in love with a boy/guy...they say that girls are the ones who fall, but like you say in this poem, there are boys that actually make mistakes that later on they are going to regret.
    Good poem.!

  • 9 years ago

    by Jennifer

    ThAT wAS pREtTY iMpRESSivE!

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great poem, this was really emotional and heartfelt. I love how you wrote this, and your rhyming was simple yet meaningful. 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 9 years ago

    by vintage darling

    This poem is very well written.

    the rhymes flowed nicely and i like how it told a story.

    favourite line was
    "Make those promises you cannot keep
    Hide those secrets that haunt my sleep"

    i could relate to it and it just fit so nicely

    keep it up :)