Wow this was really good I must admit, I loved the flow and the rhymes it made it so easy to read yet the emotions were so strong. People always ruin love and a chance at happiness for something that has no future at all, I never understood that. Great job though 5/5 for sure GG23 P.S. I would change a few words around slightly to make the poem even better, for example:
"Before you did the things above
Should've known your life without my love
Now you'll spend your life trying to find
Everything that you've left behind"
I would make it
Before you did these things above
Should've thought of life without my love
Now you'll spend your time trying to find
Everything that you left behind
Just a suggestion but it's still an amazing poem either way, excellent job GG23
I love this poem of yours....it's awesome!!!
I've never actually met ot know someone that really "fall" in love with a boy/guy...they say that girls are the ones who fall, but like you say in this poem, there are boys that actually make mistakes that later on they are going to regret.