Comments : My Death

  • 15 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    So sad.......
    very well written..very emotional..

  • 15 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    =[ awe its a nice poem, but sucks 2 have a short lived life

    fav part: "Staring into its cold dark gaze.

    As it stares into mine." << that painted a nice picture into my head. cool

    another good write!

    ~tia

  • 15 years ago

    by V3RONICA AKA lil pimp

    Wow it's so sad and good. :-(

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    WOW I LOVED TIS POEM
    i have put it on my fav poem list
    you can feel the darkness in the poem
    you are an amazing poet
    keep it up
    cant wait to read more

  • 15 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    This kind of sounds like a suicide note. N=But I know it is way deeper than that. great job

  • 15 years ago

    by chantelle kolb

    You shouldn't think like thaat life is long

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked this.
    You put alot of emotion
    into this.Hint hint KEY!!!again:D
    Lol but no you are such a great
    writer.Keep your day job:D
    -Kortney

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Another great poem. i'm really enojoying your work. great poem and i love your style. keep it up. Shanik

  • 14 years ago

    by Joshua Reimer

    Great blank verse very well thought out 5/5 also great job on putting emotion into it not many people can now a days sadly

  • WOW amazing i loved it

    keep up the amazing work

  • 14 years ago

    by LIGURE

    So emotional dude. keep it up. :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Alive yet dead within, it's a very catchy poem and so sad and emotional. I loved it. 5/5 :)

    Bri~

  • 13 years ago

    by victoria

    Another yet beautiful, emotional and very touching poem. Once again i felt this very deep inside. Love the vividness and the darkness to it.
    keep it up.

    victoria