A beautiful suicide

by resisting reason   Aug 29, 2008


Elegant and beautiful
In her dress
No one can compare
She is the best

Gliding across the room
And everyone stops to stare
Embarrassed slightly
But its enough to bare

The men were gawking
And the women turned up their noses
For when she passed by
There was a smell of roses

Her shy smile shines
And her eyes show her soul
Sad and lonely
But definitely not cold

She seemed perfect
Beautiful and reachable
Why'd she come alone
Unbelievable

Were they so ignorant
To not see perfection
Perhaps it was jealously
That pushed them to rejection

And why would the men
Not pursue a woman like this
A gift from heaven
In her flawlessness

she silently walked by
Ignoring them all
Hiding her shame
Behind a smile totally false

She made her way
To the doors
Hearing under breath whispers
Of Whor*s

Tears in her eyes
She ran all the way home
To her room
To sit alone

Crying on her bed
Totally rejected
She knew what she had to do
To be accepted

She had found a rope
But was a nervous wreck
So she tied a noose
And snapped her neck

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  • 15 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Oh my...this reminds me of somehow...i dont know how...but somehow I know I am beautiful even though im not really...I go through words in my ears...people pushing me out of the way and just thin i am too good...i am just hopless.

    But anyways....*coughs coughs* this was amazingly written...I saw the poor girl walking with fear...I felt her heart...It was beautiful but people couldnt take how beautiful it was. Its just a wonderful written about this broken hearted girl....she is finally home...but i loved this like alot...you are just amazing of telling a story...!!!!

    This story was flawless by the way just like your personality!!!!!

    CourtneyxHolland

    <3<3

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by UnhealthyExpectations

    Wow... amazing..

  • 15 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    This really id beautiful, i dont see why you dont like it. i love how you kept the aspect of perfection failing strong. it was really just...beautiful.

    --TheGothicAlbino