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  • 15 years ago

    by June

    Wow!!such a beautiful write ,and one that gives hope.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Bert,

    Your poem touched me so deep inside.
    It bears so much resemblence to my own thoughts on this matter.
    And yes indeed we search for answers...but we will forever look in vain, for there are none.
    The only way to live life is to jump in and dare to truly be yourself and then the people and things that belong to you will find their way to you(r heart)
    A much beautiful philosophical poem and one I truly enjoyed.

    Take care, my friend

    Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    I'm so glad you started writing again. I hvae missed reading your verses. This piece has so much truth.

    It's Not the Easy Road
    Following your heart
    It can hurt you so bad
    That it tears you apart
    Its the only way to live
    Though it will get you hurt
    At times it may feel
    Like you're down in the dirt
    But true love is out there
    Waiting for you
    And its worth all the struggle
    That you may go through.

    Follow your heart. You will be glad you did. Sometimes the pain is unbarable. So worth the joy true love briings when it is found.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    It's true isn't it ,we can never stop looking, until we find that soulmate. An excellent piece with an important message,never give up. Very well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by ©romoж

    2 words, Perfect written!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mishka

    Inspiring good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    Yay this was just so true, love it

    It's So Very Hard
    When you think you've found
    That your quest is done
    Only to realize
    That its just begun

    This part is beautifully written, I do believe that every time you think you know it all, yet theres so much left to be learned.
    great P.O.V =)

    It's so damn difficult
    To find which way to go
    Answers elude you
    And reasons are few

    "It's so damn difficult" I love this line including the word "damn", it somehow resembles the pain we're going through, that was great =)
    I loved the last two lines the most, they're so meaningful !!
    the whole stanza is just so inspiring and true :]

    I like the ending you penned here, its like even though you might suffer and get yourself into depression and agony, life still has its glory and will always has its ups and downs.

    Great write friend, I missed reading your poems a lot, I believe I haven't read anything for you in a long while.
    write on
    best of luck
    a definite 5/5 :)