I liked this alot the images and message was well played out and the feeling was heart wrenching but hopeful at the same time a very good write for the subject matter Plot121

Temps,

this poem hit home to me, I felt every emotion that you carefully poured into it. I wish that the key to our hearts were only given once and that that person truely treasured the special gift that it unlocked. Thr honest truth is that you can't tell what lies around the corner and to find true love you have to take that risk, unfortunately the odds are staked against us. I think you are like me and all hopeless romantics out there, we keep jumping back on the ride of love, hoping that the next time we will find our true soul mate, the person who will make all our dreams come true...one day we will ride and know that the pain was worth the wait!!

Well done

Michael

So true..Great poem.

Wow i can really relate to this, i absolutly love it, the words just blend in so well
you speak true words from the heart

Aaaawwwww... oohh my gosh.. was that ur real story?? coz i see myself on that poem.. my ex-bf hurt me so bad, he break up with me juz because he has to leave for a year.. and he done it juz in a text message.. that was 3 months ago.. and still the reason why i am smiling, its the memories that we had.. and he was really so sweet and romantic.. i still love him, but i have to move on, and find myself again.. you are a good poem writer.. keep it up:)

It definitely paint's a picture and is very story like. I felt like the end I should be learning a moral of a story which was the only thing I didn't like. But the overall message of learning & growing is wonderful.

Wow, So beautiful, love your way with words :)