Still I Cry

by Karl Wild GG23   Sep 2, 2008


Still I cry when I think of you,
Alone, where nobody can see,
Hurts not knowing what to do,
Are you still in love with me?

Still I cry when I see you smile,
Nothing made me feel as alive,
I'd die to hear you laugh awhile,
Without you it's hard to survive.

Still I cry when the phone rings,
Knowing your not on the other end,
The happiness your voice brings,
A broken heart would surely mend.

Still I cry in my lonely dreams,
You always used to meet me there,
Pillows smother my silent screams,
In a bed we no longer share.

Still I cry as tear filled river's flow,
Without your love I'll surely die,
Still, I see your face wherever I go,
If you've ever wondered why, still I cry....

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  • 9 years ago

    by ReBecca

    Awww, what a sensitive guy. Okay, well for me the poem was a little choppy in places but was still beautiful and I liked it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Your writting is simply gripping. I love every word you put on the page; everyone fits perfectly.
    This peice was sad. I could feel the desperation...the sadness, and the love left behind.

    Truly Amazing,
    5/5
    -Elaine.

  • 9 years ago

    by mommytobe

    I can realate to how you feel. its hurts to know that people could hurt people like us. i am sorry you have to deal with the pain of loosing someone you loved so dearly. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Joshua Lee

    5/5! cliche of course, but no tale can grow too old if told well!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ashley

    This poem is amazing. It hits home in so many ways. Right now i feel excatly like that! You have a wonderful and amazing talent!