Taken, Not Forsaken

by David Munoz   Jun 5, 2004


In the beginning
It was just you and me
Together Forever
As lovers should be

Our love was unbreakable
Filled with passion and fire
Filling us both
With longing and desire

When the problems arose
We just slapped them down
Nothing could touch this love
Or pull it to the ground

But then it happened
We started to see
It had become clear
That we weren't ready

We weren't ready for love
And how love is mean
Weren't ready for each other
We were just Fifteen

Though we may not be together
You still keep me taken
Believing that our love
Will not be forsaken

While we are apart
My wait will stay true
For the only thing I desire
Is to be with you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    I love this poem!! Terrific job!! You're such an awesome job!!

    Amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    This is a great poem. I hope to read more soon.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Hey David. This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Truly written from the heart and full of meaning. Your good use of words enhance the structure of this piece. Very well done and I look forward to reading more of your work.
    Take care always
    Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by David Munoz

    First off, thank you for reading this poem. If you do not know who this is about, please feel free to look back at my previous poems (Vote and comments on them are very welcome). Again, Thank You.

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