Comments : One phone call away

  • 9 years ago

    by Erin

    Beautiful poem leaves me speechless
    5/5 you deserve it

  • 9 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    Lovely write

  • 9 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    It has happend to me too.I have been in love with a guy that conted on me as his best friend.
    Great poem
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    Great!

  • 9 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    You hav captured the escence of love perfectly in this small but punchy poem. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by cassanova

    Such a beatiful poem, so expressive with few words. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    This is the 2nd time im gonna say this! this is GREAT!

  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    What a sweet loving poem. I hope David appreciates the woman you are and the love you have for him.

  • 9 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Only a stupid wouldn't add you in his/her favorite author's list, after reading this poem. This poem touched my heart very very deeply. Somewhere down the line I could find myself reciting the same words to my ex who's my best friend. I wish I can just dedicate this poem to her. But now that the equations have changed, I'm happy and content by reading this poem of yours. Rock On and keep writing.

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 9 years ago

    by kerry

    Oh this was amazing x

  • 8 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh my gosh...i love this...its so romantic and i just really love it!
    :D
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    It's full of true feelings..

    good luck.. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by unspokken

    Ahhhh. You write such good poems; I love them. You can really tell how you feel, like you really get the emotions out and the point across

  • 8 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    This sounds like one of those tough relationships where one has to let go even while still loving another, that's so tough, but you did a great job portraying the emotion :) and it seems you are a great friend