Wow this is so ture! omg im speachless it was really good
5/5

I lovee this! so simple but so true and well written.
good job!!

I really love this poem.The flow was really great and the words simple yet impactful (:

Ok this poem is off of myspace hunni...

Very nice poem and to true as well, i liked it , it flowed and rhymed well.Good job

Grant