Comments : It Doesn't Hurt

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    A very sad write,missing someone is an unbearable ache,It does however lessen in time.A heartfelt piece.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ash

    A beautiful though sad piece of writing. Truly filled with so much of emotions captured within each line..... The opening stanza was enough to capture the readers attention and have them glued to this masterpiece right till the end. Excellent work! 100/5 from me.

  • 15 years ago

    by XBroKenXyetXHeReX

    I agree, really great writing...5/5....this has so much meaning and so much emotion into it.

  • "the memories are vivid
    And evoke terrible pain
    They hit me like stones
    And fall like the rain"

    My favorite part of your poem!
    Great writting keep it up. it's very sad yet beautiful.

    *Ada*
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 15 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Great Job I really like this one lots of emotion even though in a way it's a love poem at the same time it's sad

  • 14 years ago

    by nikki

    This is a good poem! i really like it!

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    This poem is sweet yet sad great write 5/5