I love the wonderful atmoshere you have created with this piece, wonderful reassurance, kind of like a nice warm robe after a bath. C'mon sit yourself down and drink this coco :)

Only one query, is there a rhyme scheme, for i couldn't quite follow it. It didn't matter though, because its wonderfully chilled anyway.

Take care

Michael

Hello :)

I like this poem, it has a mystical, untouchable quality about it.

No worries my love, I'll be there.
Think of me as a scent in the air,
Or a soft brush of the skin,
You can even think of me as that sensation,
A humbling sensation that the wind brings.
^
A farewell to someone, someone who holds or held a special place within you and you them. I like the way you try to soften to emotional trauma by offering a reminder of love, but no, rather your spirit, the essense that makes you who you are. That spirit held in memory, but to a hopeful imagination it could be held in a breese, in a scent or even in the wind and the way it caresses your skin, likened to how those fingers used to caress.
I also like the rhyme between, skin and bring. (I like rhyme) :D

No worries my love I'll be there.
Dream of my smile to calm your rapid thoughts,
^
In dreams we can drift to a place where happiness lives, so offering that as a solution to 'rapid thought' to ease their anguish is a sincere gesture.

Imagine my kiss to make the time go on.
Don't stress my love, you'll be fine.
No worries my love I'll be there.
Wah Dan Yi my eternity.
^
This concludes with perhaps the most significant symblo of love - a kiss, or rather, the memory of one, that one last, time enduring, heart soothing kiss.

Wah Dan Yi my eternity.
^
I presume this is who this tribute of love is for..I love the rhyme here too!

Well done Cassey, I really loved this poem, you really managed to portray a higher love that rises with the wind and spans distances on earth and beyond.

Take care

Michael