Peter,

This poem has a clear message and it's a pretty sad one.
Where are you to turn to when all falls down and will He be there to save you?
Deep questions and answers are hard to find, I know..
You have a very refreshing way of writing and I am looking forward to reading more by you!

Hugs,

Ingrid

Wow this is really well expressed suc deep thoughts I look foward to reading more by you.

I like this.

Hey....thnx a lottt for ur comment first of all...
And i just read ur poem 'LOST'....
Simply great and liked hw u ended it cz u start wid a title 'LOST' and then again recall it in the last para...every line.....
And not in between....
Great workk....looking forward 2 hear more from u....
Tc.... :P

Awesome write......

Very good... I like it.. emotions wow.. words amazing... just a WOW..!!!!!!!

Inspirational ideas... really sad, but true indeed...