Comments : My Country Tis Gone (Collab)

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a powerful piece. Excellent collaboration between you two. Good flow and word choice. Good rhyme scheme, it makes perfect sense without forced rhyming. A well thought out and thought provoking write!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay you and Bob did a wonderful job on this collab....It is hard to keep a dry eye while reading it.....thinking of everything taken away from the Native Americans.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Such a touching piece. I read it many times over and each time I felt your words even more. Touching !

    You have both penned an amazing write that deserves to be on the front pages.

  • 9 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    True what we did was wrong but we (nation) were young and hungry and of course we know better than others. Well done good word flow and imagery.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)
    Love you
    Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A very nice tribute to my ancestors and the injustices done to them. Thank you.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    An accurate evocation of too many tragic truths...

  • 9 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    ExTreme!!!!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lyn

    Beautiful, well-written poem, very evocative
    and heartfelt

  • 9 years ago

    by Sea2Summit

    A wonderfully crafted yet sad reminder about the the dark side of human greed. Using its self righteousness to justify its oppression for its own material gain. When will it end?

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