Emptiness

by kylexthexmagnificent   Sep 9, 2008


Emptiness,
fills within me.
a ghost to the world
a lost love i see.

so many fears,
the end is near,
everything lost,
love no longer lives here.

this place,
this failing heart,
beaten and weathered,
its falling apart

the sky darkens now,
the air is still,
nothing stirs around,
emptiness my heart feels.

i am but a ghost,
searching for my lost soul
walkin among the living,
hoping my story unfolds.

emptiness,
fills within me,
a ghost to the world,
a lost love i seek....

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  • 9 years ago

    by victoria

    I love the whole ghost concept. very moving and emotional. Ive alwaysed wondered if a ghost has unfinished business-like love.lol.
    great job.
    love your work.

    victoria

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I really liked this poem. Esp how the first and last stanza had the sames lines... except for the fourth line which ends the poem with " a lost love I seek..." which to me is the meaning of the whole poem, Lol. You feel empty, beaten, weathered, falling apart in search of that love. A well written and poem with good use of words to express these empty feelings. Loved it :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Such a sad poem, but very deep and powerful. i loved it. keep on writing. Shanik

  • 10 years ago

    by meganmarie

    This was good. beautifully written. beautiful emotions and depth.
    --lovedroughtmelody

  • 10 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very emotional write. Poem of loneliness and sorrow. Good to read. well done!

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