Aww!!! this is so sad!!!

I'm screaming out don't say it's all in my head
Will anyone come to their senses before I wake up dead?

^^i hear ya....... i've come to my senses at least enough to hear you.......

I'm hanging on by a thread; in the darkness I call
As I reach out a hand, I wake up dead and start to fall

^^..........and reach out a hand to you.

btw you better not ever ever EVER wake up dead!!!!! (cuz you know, that would just be freaky.................) ;-) !!

Lol, yeah, really scary.

That was sweet :]

nice job.
5/5