Comments : Again

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Very interesting form of poem. I love the structure. I think it is very beautiful

    I like this poem because I feel the emotions are strong. Tears! Life! Love! Dream! Truly, it seems life has treat the poet's mind harshly enough to create such an inspiration to write a poem.

    I admire your ability to write this art out of your pen. I am astonished again.

    I can relate to this poem very well and the language you used. Well-thought sentence and everything. It is really nice work indeed.

    I will add this poem to my favourites. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dream! You are the one I hate most
    Don't get in again like a creepy ghost
    ^^I asked for this many, many times, but when you least expect it a new dream creeps in:)
    Good poem by you!

    Hugs,

    Ingrid 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Boy

    Excellent piece of work well done my dear... a classic writing...

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    A very heartfelt piece. The imagery is wonderful.

    Once again that same turmoil
    Back again that nasty pain
    Tears! How long will you chase me?
    I'm the submissive child of my destiny.

    The pain from losing the one we love is the worst pain to suffer. Love the word choices

    A bonding that is designed to death
    Blind lane goes nowhere but to disaster
    Love! Why do you like to play with my faith?
    Your crafts I'll never able to master.

    This stanza is my favorite. Seems like people give up on love to easily. Instead of trying to work through things together.

    Time again to swim through the tears
    Then again desperate for new hope
    Dream! You are the one I hate most
    Don't get in again like a creepy ghost

    Very sad. Waiting for hope to bring light back into your life.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by NEIL MUNRO

    Sourav, a very strong yet emotional piece from start to finish