Well, I really like the emotion and
the story. Really cute, but, I found
some flaws. The poem didn't flow
so smoothly. And I didn't like how you
used the word crack in two sentences
side by side. And you didn't just for
that one particular word you did for
other words too which is a major flow
throw off. But other than that I really
liked it. 5/5
<3tay

Overflowing with emotion. Astonishing flow. Excellent word usage. And the concept was brilliant. What more can I say? Perfect.