Comments : My daughter

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    There is so much power in your words, Paul.
    I hope that all will turn out for the best for you and your little family:)
    May she grow out to be a beautiful woman, your little peanut:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Aww bless...the ending is truly so beautiful!
    lovely read. take care x

  • 15 years ago

    by Roxy

    Interesting choice of style you have here and also it's full of meaning the last lines of the poem really summed up the whole thing because I think that is the part which holds the most meaning because it's about your daughter :) it's a very touching poem and although I cannot relate to it I can in a sense understand it. xxxxxxxx Great read,
    xxxx Much love,
    Roxy xxxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is very well written. I like the style.in the beggining it showed so much pain and then as it got to the end it showed how one thing can make u happy. Very beautiful

  • 13 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Nice powerful words....good job