Ummm well i don't really know what to say to this hmm i liked it but i didn't like it all the same the emotion behind every word was very powerful, yet i wish it would have flowed a bit better i had a hard time getting into the piece simply because there was no true structure or rhythem to the words, but int he same sence the words you used were discriptive, and the image i did manage to form was very sweet so i shall say good job im raring this a 4/5

Hey i really liked this there is a lot of emotion put into it and the words you used created a visual in my head which i really liked it nice work 5/5

Hmmm.. that was so sweet kind of poetry and it really made me smile and inspired. those imagery seems really captured my heart that was absolutely portrayed ur feelings very well. the message was really outstanding i'd really enjoyed alot. all the stanzas has a reat flow so i think its perfect. every words are reallly so sweet 5/5

...strike a match...and all shall see us burning....