Wow! So wonderful! keep it up 5/5

^_^

Then he meet those eyes

^i think you meant MET instead of MEET^

She can't stop what she feel
^i think you should add an S at the end so it reads: "She can't stop what she feels"

She's falling in love with that guy
Whose eyes is the light of her soul
Whose voice make her comfortable
Whose smile make her feel secure
and whose presence make her complete..
^this was my favorite part. the rhyme really impressed me, ^

thanks for sharing
~Kuro

I realli like this :]

Awesome poem 5/5 loved it