Temps! this poem was wonderful! Your poems always leave me speechless and they get better and better each time! Keep it up!
5/5 :)

I'm touched by the way u care abt the heart u thought u broke, but wishing urs to be burnt is not helpful...cute u wanna punish urself to show ur sorry...

After a while, coals will be the only thing remaining on this-
cold ground, symbolizing a broken heart left to die alone.

^^i liked this part a lot, very deep, sad feelings i see...

I'm sure ur heart deserves to live temps :)
I somehow find the guilt u feel inside u(in the poem) is cute and innocent...

Really amazing. love this poem. beautifully written

Hmmmmm....
Wonderfully Writen.....
You Don't Know Me And Im Sorry For Intruding...
But Your Poetry Is Like Nothing I Have Ever Read Before

30/5

So much feeling and emotion compressed into a single poem results in something amazing...absoultetly beautiful...loved every line;-)write some more soon!;-p

For it will only cause more trauma; the fog will only-
solidify, thoughts will entwine into a tighter knot.
Again , I don't understand your use of "-" .
Forlorn heart yearns for love a third time, yet knows that-
it may never love again, already crushing your heart twice.
Or here .
After a while, coals will be the only thing remaining on this-
cold ground, symbolizing a broken heart left to die alone.
All memories that it has experienced along the way-
will diminish within the coals and none will be remembered.

Or here either . I think you should try different punctuation .

Broken heart that bleeds, screams your sweet name.
Shattered to pieces, stomped on, left to lay on the floor-
And here it seems to be missing words ..

Um , I don't know . Big words which work well in sad poems , but "-" these things throw off your flow alot . 4/5