How can love burn if never returned?

by Finalgravedigger   Sep 21, 2008


Striving, crawling and begging for the ultimate prize of life.
Obstacles that block and ensnare us are causes of
vexatious strifes.
A wish and meaning of peace shall be bestowed if ever obtained.
Pain and fear quickly shatter as darknesses chains are unrestrained.

All have no choice but to travel this hopeful and decaying path.
At the end one will be granted greatness or feel love's twisted wrath.
As someone pours their heart and gets deeper in realities held fame
The slightest denial or lost ruins loves de lusional name.

What shall happen as delicate dreams crumble and wane?
Lives become tainted and shriek as efforts tumble in vain.
Wants and failures control the DNA of our soul's craving distress.
Past experiences are scorched to cinders as minds are left a mess.

Souls dwell on ashes as love didn't stop the fire of ripping hearts
Scars and burns transform spirit's skins as pieces of them depart
Remains of ourselves than only ask to be whole fully restored
Standing broken with hunger all survive on thoughts that are deplored.

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  • 14 years ago

    by letmedie2night

    Nicely writtten i loved it your truelly good at this lol so far the best poems and poet i read today truelly amazing keep up the good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I felt that this poem was very well presented. As are all of your poems that I have read so far.

    I enjoyed this but once agian the flow came into effect, it once again wasn't enough to take away from the poem fully, but was enough to mention.

    I think that this poem is very well done. One of my favorite poems that you've done.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Illusion

    Thats well written
    5/5
    gud rhymewords used
    and that went well with the thought u want to potray.

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow. this is a beautiful poem. deep, powerful, emotional, well descriptive. it is an amazing poem. i love it. well written, i can feel the meaning of it. goodjob.
    --lovedroughtmelody

  • 15 years ago

    by xxFound Againxx

    This is absolutley amazing and its crazy how someone can enter my mind and write what i cannot