Let go

by AnnMarie   Jun 6, 2004


Still scared of letting go,
Please say it isn’t so,
You took my heart away from me;
And now you want to set it free.
For this girl that you once lusted,
And now my heart is busted.
So now with heavy head and broken heart;
I try to make a brand new start,
But as I crawl along this wall,
Trying so hard not to fall,
Into your deep blue eyes,
That never seems to see my cries.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is a good poem, there's lots of emotion in it!! i like the topic too. some of the rhymes did seem a little forced... and at some parts, the flow was a little off... but it was still really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    This is really sad and full of emotiion. You paint such a vividly tragic picture and i love the ending about falling into his eyes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ahhh. I love it. I can relate so well. Heh. Anyway, the poem was amaxing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    "Trying so hard not to fall,
    Into your deep blue eyes"

    How sweet! It made me think of a girl walking along the rim of a wall, and a boy standing on the ground, holding his arms up, saying that he will catch her, but she knows that he is not good for her, and she doesn't want to fall...

    It was short, but I still liked it.

    //T.L.//

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It got the point across though you might want to limit your use of the word heart every now and then.

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