I love it. its awesome. the only thing is the flow..a bit. just with 5 and 6. they go together. but they dont see to go with the rest. maybe its just the way im saying it. oh and the second to last line. but overall its awesome. :)

Its emotion that is this poems best quality and it has emotion in bucket loads. Feeling it a bit here lol.
Keep up the good work.
You know that its feelings in poems that matter the most.

So now with heavy head and broken heart;
I try to make a brand new start,
But as I crawl along this wall,
Trying so hard not to fall,
Into your deep blue eyes,
That never seems to see my cries.
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I loved all that!! This poem was wow. It was short, but it was good. You worded it great. Really good job on this! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This was amaizng...Great job...I loved the last two lines...Great Write...
Emma 5/5

It got the point across though you might want to limit your use of the word heart every now and then.

"Trying so hard not to fall,
Into your deep blue eyes"

How sweet! It made me think of a girl walking along the rim of a wall, and a boy standing on the ground, holding his arms up, saying that he will catch her, but she knows that he is not good for her, and she doesn't want to fall...

It was short, but I still liked it.

//T.L.//

Ahhh. I love it. I can relate so well. Heh. Anyway, the poem was amaxing.

This is really sad and full of emotiion. You paint such a vividly tragic picture and i love the ending about falling into his eyes.

This is a good poem, there's lots of emotion in it!! i like the topic too. some of the rhymes did seem a little forced... and at some parts, the flow was a little off... but it was still really good!