This is a beautiful but sad write Luanne, It's sad but true that without that feeling of being someones number one, of having their undying love, our world can be covered with sadness. Pure and heartfelt! what can be better!
Thank you for the comment on my piece of poetry and also congrats are in order for you too. This was a wonderful piece which I have the pleasure of reading.
I adored the message within this piece, though it was simple it was definitly effective and created a sense of alone over the atmosphere. This poem had alot of emotion entwined with it and the use of memories in the first stanza really let the reader know what you were writing about.
Now feels like never
and close seems so far away
Moments tick as hours
foregone memories stay
The first stanza above was my favorite. The flow of it just rolled off my tongue and stuck in my mind. It was a stanza that really plants itself into your heart.
I found this piece to be lovely and again congrats on your win. You deserve it.
I love this poem a lot sweetheart.
It tore my heart to pieces.
Loved the emotions you poured, I swear it made me feel like I'm the one who wrote the piece.
I noticed you haven't written since March 26th, so I thought I'd comfort myself with your old writings until you post a new one.
and I really did love this poem hunn.
Looking forward to some new one :)