Comments : A Slip

  • 15 years ago

    by thehangman

    I loved how smooth the poem was, along with the word choice. Very good!

    -Andrew

  • 15 years ago

    by XxxYour broken angelxxX

    It was very good.Nice job.5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by jess and cait

    Very good you've got the talent keep up the work ive read a few of yours good on you

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by jess and cait

    Very good you've got the talent keep up the work ive read a few of yours good on you

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by stacey pearce

    Very very good short and sweet brilent write!

    xoxoxox

  • 15 years ago

    by TiffanyTrippout

    *Clap, Clap*.. Very nice. You should check out my poem "A little deeper, a little less". It gives off the same vibe as this one here did. 5/5.

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    Tiffany </3

  • 15 years ago

    by Lauren

    I love this!! It's really great, and the words flow together really well!!