Comments : Why

  • 15 years ago

    by j3liBn

    So original...really cool!!!keep writing so i can keep reading;)

  • 15 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    I like this, and the way it's written, with the short, one or two word lines, and then a longer line.
    great job 5/5

  • No!! Don't give up!!
    great poem!! its sad and full of emotions! keep fighting hun! show cancer that he has messed with the wrong person...

    keep writting you have sooo much talent!!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 15 years ago

    by sezz

    Loved it, but i love ALL you work =P simply amazing. always going to be here for you sweetie

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree with those commenting before me. this was very well written and you chose the right words and placed them perfectly. Nice work here.

  • 15 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Tonight i read some of your poems, and trust me they are really depressing..... no rhyming but the flow and emotions are too much..... nice writing.....keep up