Great poem!! It really does apply to the story that repeats itself over and over again between a girl and boy!! Keep writing!! You're good at it!!

Aww babe...
And you tell me i'm a good writer?
pcht!
You did a wonderful job of conveying your emotions in this piece. I liked how it was kinda a story, in a way. Some of the stanzas were weak...could be tuned up a bit. Or some of your rhyming was off. But i still got the message. I'd say, that by fixing these few little glitches...you'd have an amazing, super-duper fantabulous-o poem.
I miss talkin to you. And so, i don't know the whole story behind this...
But remember my theory on scummy boys *tehe*
ILLLLLLLY! :]

I didn't think the ending was weak. I think it reiterated the point of the poem, implying, if I'm guessing correctly, that the same thing is going to happen again. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

I think it's an awesome ending... Loved it alot.
My fav. part issssss -
"The smiles, the winks, the laughs
everything i held so dear...
they'll all be so meaningless,
now that your giving them to her."

Grrr!!!
Loved it. <3 5/5