A very artistic piece of work. You have a very rich imagination in you. I liked the descriptive words that were used here.. Mind blowing scene, mind blowing words, one fo the most beautiful poems that describes nature that i have ever read. Good job.
9 years ago
Wow. nice use of adjectives. love it, its awesome KM
Reading your poem is like taking a walk through an Autumn landscape. Your discriptions paint the scene so clearly that it becomes almost three dimentional. I believe it is like an exploded Haiku, an elaborated version of a condensed short form...My favourite word is...pleasurement :)
Reading this reminded me of my trips to Brown County, Nashville, Indiana. The smell of the pines, the color of the leaves in fall, the crisp cool air in October, covered bridges. Makes me want to pack my bags and head there right now. Excellent!!!
Wow, you have painted a very beautiful picture of Autumn in my mind. Your words really describe this colorful time of year. I felt like I was walking in the middle of the forest during this beautiful season. Great Job 5/5