Comments : The Artwork Of Autumn

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    A very artistic piece of work. You have a very rich imagination in you. I liked the descriptive words that were used here.. Mind blowing scene, mind blowing words, one fo the most beautiful poems that describes nature that i have ever read. Good job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Wow. nice use of adjectives. love it, its awesome KM

  • 9 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    LOve it nice word flow and imagery.l

  • 9 years ago

    by vintage darling

    This poem is beautifully.
    imagery is descriptive and it makes the reader relate very well to it.

    my favourite line was :
    "Like a painted mural that catches your heart and soul,"
    it is such a good comparison.

    keep it up.

    -naiive girl

  • 9 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh this is so beautiful. The imagery is just mindblowing. I can literally picture everything that you wrote in my mind. The flow was flawless, and overall, this was just amazing. (:

    Well done.
    5.5
    Take care,
    Stephanie.

  • 9 years ago

    by ether

    For a short little thing, this is quite moving. I loved the vocabulary choice that you used and it's just generally a great nature poem. Autumn is beautiful. 5/5

    jess ~

  • 9 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Reading your poem is like taking a walk through an Autumn landscape. Your discriptions paint the scene so clearly that it becomes almost three dimentional. I believe it is like an exploded Haiku, an elaborated version of a condensed short form...My favourite word is...pleasurement :)

    Well done

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Katie

    The imagery is nice in this one, good job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Gentle Storm

    For us who live within the tropics, there is no such season as autumn...but i experienced it reading this poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by Gentle Storm

    For us who live within the tropics, there is no such season as autumn...but i experienced it reading this poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    Nice imagery. Although that season is absent is my country, i can see it clearly through this poem. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lu

    As I read your words, I could not help but to read them aloud. The words just whisper ever so gently to the ear and sweep into the soul and settle peacefully.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem and the imagery it created was wonderful

    Excellent read !
    Luanne

  • 8 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    What a beautifull description of winter, and i like that you mention the smell because seasons do have their own smell . Well done

    Grant

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Reading this reminded me of my trips to Brown County, Nashville, Indiana. The smell of the pines, the color of the leaves in fall, the crisp cool air in October, covered bridges. Makes me want to pack my bags and head there right now. Excellent!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Shadow and Flame

    This poem is beautiful, I really understand it. I really enjoy the imagery, it really is autumn! Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 8 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow, you have painted a very beautiful picture of Autumn in my mind. Your words really describe this colorful time of year. I felt like I was walking in the middle of the forest during this beautiful season. Great Job 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Paiger

    Beautiful, one of the nicest descriptions of fall I've heard, and it's a pretty common topic, being as beautiful as it is :)

    great job, 5/5