Comments : An Elaborately Designed Butterfly.

  • 9 years ago

    by ether

    I don't know what it all meant. I don't know why you wrote this and I'm not sure if I could handle knowing why.
    But I do know that the sorrow in this was too much for my eyes to bear. F_ck.

    I've not once before cried reading a piece of literature.
    Well now I've once before cried when reading a piece of goddamn art.

    And though after reading this 10 times I still don't know what it all means, the mood makes up for it.
    How can a human being write something like that?

  • 9 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    "you felt red for so long"
    I'm not sure why, but I really like that part.
    Nicely written :]

  • 8 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    The thing i didn't like is that the lines are so long. maybe divide it up into four lined stanzas? or something it was just overwhelming when i saw it

    you did a great job with rhyme! i loved how you had to read into the poem to get the message

  • 8 years ago

    by ether

    I will always love this. Christ. It's brilliant.