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I don't know what it all meant. I don't know why you wrote this and I'm not sure if I could handle knowing why.
But I do know that the sorrow in this was too much for my eyes to bear. F_ck.
I've not once before cried reading a piece of literature.
Well now I've once before cried when reading a piece of goddamn art.
And though after reading this 10 times I still don't know what it all means, the mood makes up for it.
How can a human being write something like that?
"you felt red for so long"
I'm not sure why, but I really like that part.
Nicely written :]
by Cotton Candy Clouds
The thing i didn't like is that the lines are so long. maybe divide it up into four lined stanzas? or something it was just overwhelming when i saw it
you did a great job with rhyme! i loved how you had to read into the poem to get the message
I will always love this. Christ. It's brilliant.