Comments : Questioning The Clocks

  • 15 years ago

    by thehangman

    I loved this: "Machinery, a useless toy, a key that's meant to not unlock
    All the clocks that tick along are simply there for time to mock." Good Job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I love the rhyme scheme that you've chosen, you made it work really well. (: Your word choice was extensive and simply beautiful and the flow was very smooth all the way through. You did amazing. Keep writing. (: 5/5

    Take care,
    Steph

  • 15 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Beautiful poem, good read right before the new year, invokes images of the art of Salvidor Dali & his paintings of melting clocks frozen in time!