Awwwwwwwwwwww...that was sweet and touchy...u're such a stubborn guy in love!!

I really wish u'll win eventually!! or I WILL get upset...

wish all that powerful love wont go away for nothing...gud luck winning her heart :) as losing isnt an option for you...

i again enjoyed the poem :)

keep writting...hope ur next poem will be that u won her heart!!!

This was really a very strong poem!
You are so right in all that you say and you made it into a killer poem as well.
Very well done:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Im speechless this poem was amazing

What a sad.. but truely inspirational write.
It is great to be in love.. unconditionally.. you wrote about loving so much that it didnt matter how much you were hurt and ridiculed, as long as you were with her, everything would be ok. Very sweet and i really.. i dont know.. this poem made me feel really content.. so thankyou for writing it. I dont remember how you went in the contest, but im sure this was a winner.

Don't go sitting their accept the fact of life
^^
Should be 'there'
their is used in relation to another person, such as, it was their bag.

A great poem.. i really loved this one, i think it might be one of my favourites of yours. so keep up the great work.
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Once again very very awesome poem 5/5 Caleb Hammett Poet With A Purpose

Awww, this was yet again another great poem! i loved the wording and the rhyming. It was a very sweet love poem.. Keep up the great work

That was amazing:]
veryyyy nice job.

:]
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Nice poetry. I really like the language of the poem as well as rhyming... The way you expressed your unconditional love is just "Wow!"
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