Hey this was a really good poem. very touching and deep. lot of emotion in this one too. 5/5 keep it up.

Beautifully written, great ryme, awesome choice of words.

Nice vocabulary....!! keep it up.. I really love it,..5/5 ^_^

WOW!! so many powerful & true emotions...
she'll be really lucky to accept ur love...i wish one day she'll fall for you :(...

i totally enjoyed the poem, was so effective, touchy and ur true feelings are clear in it...

keep writting...wish u the best in life :)

I love ur very detailed poems
btw i think on the 1st stanza u mean chest instead of chess? other than that i think it is a perferctly great written poem... keep it up

I love them awesome great write 5/5 Caleb Hammett

Wow! i love this!!! its really good!