Good poem I like the meaning and point to it. I have actually felt the way before and I know it's one of the most amazing feelings one can have.. Great job

Beck

Repetition is a problem again .. But that's so easily changed . Um , I don't really see an artistic point to this poem .. There's no imagery , no rhymes , no flow .. So perhaps adding one of those three aspects would make it a bit better . 4/5

I really liked this poem. I can really relate to it. The word choice was great and so was the flow. Keep up the good work. I gave it a 5/5

Oh and I saw nothing wrong with that needed fixed or anything. Nice job!