Wow it kinda describes me too great job

Aw... i'm sorry.. this poem is beautifully written. 5/5

Aww dats kinda sad 2 see our disgrace in d mirror....but u described it well...dats wat can be seen truly...hope she breaths again!..5/5...its so obvious

peace~

That was really good ! :]
it had excellent flow and rhyme.

very nice:]
5/5

This is so heartbreaking. I think we've all felt like this at some point in our lifes and if we haven't then we sure will. Beautifully penned. 5/5, Em