It's a thin line

by CY GINDLE   Oct 9, 2008


I hate her so bad
she's driving me mad
making me sad
but I love her

I wish she would
die
She's making me cry
I wish I was high
but I love her

she did this to me
why could'nd I see
how blind I could be
but I love her

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  • 7 years ago

    by Emily

    I love it. it is short and sweet, the point is expressed beautifully. You're very talented, keep up the good work. You are definitely one of my favorite authors.

  • 8 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I like the structure and the rhyming is great.

  • 8 years ago

    by nicole

    This has a melody to it as u read, as if you were writting a song. i like it

  • 8 years ago

    by music4pumpkins

    This is great. shortly descriptive, lovely writing using simple words and rhymes to describe so much emotion. i normally have to write an essay to get the same point across.

  • 8 years ago

    by XxFailedxForgottonxX

    Nice. Love the ryming. a little short but its still good = ] 5/5