Comments : Scavenger - Redux

  • 15 years ago

    by Melissa

    Now this is a remarkable poem! I adore when you write observational poetry, you do it so darn well. From beginning to end, it's just perfection! Awesome work, Corinne! ;o) Love it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Every word on every page
    Is ravenously devoured
    The lives of others
    Happy or horrid
    Fills her empty hours
    Pouring over her soul
    Like so many lattes
    Prepared by bored baristas
    ^^
    I love this part Corinne! Especially the first 2 lines.

    A wonderful re-write Corinne
    Luanne