Can't Escape Fate

by Nabila   Oct 13, 2008


Don't be bothered by the fact
That you'll die someday,
Loose someone dear
Or cry someday.
Don't be worried that you might
Feel threatened someday,
Be duped by your friends
Or be cheated in some way.
Don't be disturbed by the thought
Of being alone some day,
Being hit by a bus,
Or getting fired some day.
Don't be afraid that you might be
Criticized some day,
Fall sick for a long time
Or loose your property in some way.
'Cause you can't escape
Fate in any way,
No matter what, it'll catch
Up with you some day.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bonnie Rivers

    OK.. now that i can read this one, i really like it.

    however i found two things:

    1: i think its a type-o... "Be duped by your friends" i think its supposed to be "dumped"

    2. it seemed like you said some day a lot!

    But, it was an excellent poem, just try to watch repetition of the same word. you do an awesome job though!! keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Bonnie Rivers

    What is up with the funky numbers and stuff in this???