Comments : Can't Escape Fate

  • 15 years ago

    by Bonnie Rivers

    What is up with the funky numbers and stuff in this???

  • 15 years ago

    by Bonnie Rivers

    OK.. now that i can read this one, i really like it.

    however i found two things:

    1: i think its a type-o... "Be duped by your friends" i think its supposed to be "dumped"

    2. it seemed like you said some day a lot!

    But, it was an excellent poem, just try to watch repetition of the same word. you do an awesome job though!! keep up the good work.