Comments : Saddest Words

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Slip those words back in your mouth,
    Don't let them take your soul,
    I'd rather live a life of pain,
    Than give up that control."

    I love your word choice here and rhyming here and the thought you put into this piece. Definetly made me think, and I enjoyed reading through your words. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....