This was indeed a wonderful poem. Loved the word usage. Sad, but so true.

Great Job, Sweetie
Mom

It looks as though you have come through with flying colors my friend, just extraordinary! Its so good to see you again, writing and all. Tim

Oh it's so nice to see you writing again, Holly. If this is how you write when you're suffering from writers block, then wow! Such a powerful, sad poem you've written here. The ending is perfect. I hope you'll continue writing...

Holly you have done an amazing job on the re-write my friend.
I am so happy to see you back with us and ... writing again

~Hugs~
Twin Lu

Holly
You did an awesome job on this rewrite challenge. Excellent imagery and word choices.
Excellent!
Take Care
Cindy

Congrats on your win Holly!
(((hugs)))
Cindy

Excellent job on the rewrite!! Good word choice in this thought provoking piece!

Excellent write...just amazging

5/5 from me darl(:x