The rain

by Marina   Oct 16, 2008


The rain, is falling on my shadow,
I look, At you, but you look right through,me,
She's in, the way,
I Don't understand, this is not, what we planned,
we talked about forever, we talked about life,
you said that you want me to be your life,
but i guess thats over now,
I'll get over you,somehow,
but all i see is the rain falling on my shadow.
-Marina Brooks
**not finished, but here we go, i'd love feed back**

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  • 10 years ago

    by Ken

    Good job alnst as good as mine made me think i wrote dat lol syke naw it waz rel god tho