Very romantic imagery,what better than a summer night and someone to love! sensual write.excellent!

Beautifully written, with so much romance and love behind the words. A great story of two people deeply in love with each other, great descriptions! Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

I loved the opening stanza. and the ending was just as great. a very sensual and romantic write. =]

- Liz

Indeed a poem that speeks volumes to the heart! Well done!

Aww Ingrid
what a sweet passion you penned in this piece.
absolutely breath-taking .

I loved the fact that every first 2 lines in the stanzas didn't rhyme, but the second 2 did..that was really new and creative.

I don't really read romance poems, but I gotta admit you capture my heart =]
Write on
xx

Wow this is poem is truely passionate n sweet...u realli captivate me with ur 1st stanza;)