Great ending, Bill. Such a dark poem you've written, so fitting for Halloween though. It is then that we seem to unleash our demons for play or perhaps more... Anywho, nice writing as usual. Hope all is well...

Bill
You did an awesome job on this piece. The imagery is fantastic. This just draws the reader right into the darkness. Spine Chilling.
Take Care
Love Cindy

This is awesome. Reminded me novel of Dean Koontz... :)

Loved the experience, it was like watching a 3D movie, all alone in hall.

Reading couple of stanzas for few minutes and the effect stays thereafter, very few poems makes me feel this way. Loved it.

all the best and take care

Bill,
I so enjoyed the word play and thought this was very reminscent of something that we would hear from Pink Floyd. I love the whole Alice in Wonderland type theme you implied and the trickery and imagery. Absolutely awesome job bringing this to the table.

Great Job